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June 18, 2013
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Hey Loser by Eitriarch Hey Loser by Eitriarch
Been working on this the last few days. Seemed to take forever to finally finish, but I'm glad it's finally done.

Fernando's a jerk, what else is new.
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Initial Impression: I'm not a loser! You're a loser! With your weird skin... What is up with his skin? It must be a style thing, okay, nice background though. Would probably make a good t-shirt or poster design!

Perception Lines: My eyes start at his face and hand, travel down his body to his right foot and then follow the 'Hey Loser!' back up in a tidy circle. I don't even notice the dotted background until afterwards, it fills the white space nicely.

Vision: The style and emotion of this piece is obvious. The character is lively, the white space is managed appropriately.

Originality: To my knowledge this is an OC or at least not a character I am familiar with. The skin and coloration is interesting and executed well. The framing as if for a poster is spot on for the emotions of the character here.

Technique: The art is very stylized, the coloration is well done and keeps attention on the subject. There's only a few things like the angle of the speech bubble which I think could be a little less tight allowing for a wider circle of perception. Also the shadow cast by the hair is a little to thick and detracts from the good job you did there. Same with the right arm, shadow thickens to much.
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disownedbeef Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
I love this! its so lively and bright, great style!
Eitriarch Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013   Digital Artist
aaaaaaaah thank you very much!!!!
nanobit Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how you managed to keep the colours on the lineart separated but still connected at the same time. I thinks it’s hard to make it look as harmonic as you did there. Also the colours are so bright and fun but not chaotic especially on his sweater (which I'd buy instantly btw XD!). Great work on that! (Also I love the way you did the sneakers and the little holes in his pants :heart:)
Eitriarch Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013   Digital Artist
ah, well thank you very much! Colored lineart is something I just learned how to do properly within the last year or two. Before it was always a terrible mess XD

hahaha lots of people want his jacket, me included. I wish there were cooler rainbow clothes in real life. I can never seem to find anything that isn't lame. lol
nanobit Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Progess is always nice. I love seeing it in mine and the work of others. And yes, rainbow coloured clothes are so hard to find :/ Good looking ones even more. So this one would really be a nice change :)
Zahzumafoo Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
Dude. This. THIS.
Your art style is so dang cool, expressions and pose are great-- AND DOSE HANDS. OMG. WHY ARE YOUR HANDS SO CUTE??

Excuse me as I watch you.
And steal Fernando's shirt.
Because holy shit, I'd pay SO MUCH MONEY for a shirt like that. Q<Q
Eitriarch Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   Digital Artist
whaaa wow thank you!! Your comment made my day ;u;

I want his shirt so bad too! I wish it were easy to make, because I would totally do it XD

Thank you again, I try really hard to improve and HANDS are a killer for me.
Zahzumafoo Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
D'ooohhhh~~ QvQ
WELL I'M GLAD!! This PICTURE made my day, so I guess we're even~! :heart:

AND DUDE, I AM SINCERELY TEMPTED TO TRY AND MAKE A SHIRT LIKE THIS. IS THAT BAD?? ... But, I know the extent of my own laziness, so I doubt if it'll ever happen. ;<; IF IT DID, THOUGH-- I WOULD TOTES MAKE YOU ONE!!

You're quite welcome, though!
-- P.S. I am raiding your gallery. Sorry if I +favspam, but HOLY SHIT, YOUR BOYS ARE JUST SO FUCKING CUTE. 8A8 I AM DYING :icondesireyouplz:
Eitriarch Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   Digital Artist
no, no by all means if you want to try to make it that would be AWESOME. And I would 100% pay you to make me one if you did. 8D

And no need to apologize for the favs, lol. I'm not one of those people that gets mad over favspam :3c I just feel happy you like my OCs.
Ganbatte526 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
For some reason I feel I would actually wear that
I feel weird now. I wonder why.
Oh we'll I guess my feelings are an enigma!
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