Hey Loser

Initial Impression: I'm not a loser! You're a loser! With your weird skin... What is up with his skin? It must be a style thing, okay, nice background though. Would probably make a good t-shirt or poster design!

Perception Lines: My eyes start at his face and hand, travel down his body to his right foot and then follow the 'Hey Loser!' back up in a tidy circle. I don't even notice the dotted background until afterwards, it fills the white space nicely.

Vision: The style and emotion of this piece is obvious. The character is lively, the white space is managed appropriately.

Originality: To my knowledge this is an OC or at least not a character I am familiar with. The skin and coloration is interesting and executed well. The framing as if for a poster is spot on for the emotions of the character here.

Technique: The art is very stylized, the coloration is well done and keeps attention on the subject. There's only a few things like the angle of the speech bubble which I think could be a little less tight allowing for a wider circle of perception. Also the shadow cast by the hair is a little to thick and detracts from the good job you did there. Same with the right arm, shadow thickens to much.