Initial Impression: I'm not a loser! You're a loser! With your weird skin... What is up with his skin? It must be a style thing, okay, nice background though. Would probably make a good t-shirt or poster design!
Perception Lines: My eyes start at his face and hand, travel down his body to his right foot and then follow the 'Hey Loser!' back up in a tidy circle. I don't even notice the dotted background until afterwards, it fills the white space nicely.
Vision: The style and emotion of this piece is obvious. The character is lively, the white space is managed appropriately.
Originality: To my knowledge this is an OC or at least not a character I am familiar with. The skin and coloration is interesting and executed well. The framing as if for a poster is spot on for the emotions of the character here.
Technique: The art is very stylized, the coloration is well done and keeps attention on the subject. There's only a few things like the angle of the speech bubble which I think could be a little less tight allowing for a wider circle of perception. Also the shadow cast by the hair is a little to thick and detracts from the good job you did there. Same with the right arm, shadow thickens to much.
I love how you managed to keep the colours on the lineart separated but still connected at the same time. I thinks it’s hard to make it look as harmonic as you did there. Also the colours are so bright and fun but not chaotic especially on his sweater (which I'd buy instantly btw XD!). Great work on that! (Also I love the way you did the sneakers and the little holes in his pants )
D'ooohhhh~~ QvQ WELL I'M GLAD!! This PICTURE made my day, so I guess we're even~!
AND DUDE, I AM SINCERELY TEMPTED TO TRY AND MAKE A SHIRT LIKE THIS. IS THAT BAD?? ... But, I know the extent of my own laziness, so I doubt if it'll ever happen. ;<; IF IT DID, THOUGH-- I WOULD TOTES MAKE YOU ONE!!
You're quite welcome, though! -- P.S. I am raiding your gallery. Sorry if I +favspam, but HOLY SHIT, YOUR BOYS ARE JUST SO FUCKING CUTE. 8A8 I AM DYING